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Jose M. Nieves
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  • Joined June 27, 2008
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Lil - lineart

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sketch: http://thetruehentaiaddict.hartists.net/gallery/submission/14382

Messed up with the right hand, but at least I fixed the head (not that noticeable in the sketch, but it's there). I'd fix everything, but I've gotta practice my coloring for something important.

Anyway, her name's Katherine T. Lilium (also known as Lil), and she should not be confused with Katherine T. Lilith (Kat) or that futa catgirl I drew over a week ago. She's one of my main OCs, an alien, and is also a nudist - though she stays dressed during one of these conditions:

1. When she's telling the future: As one of the few people blessed with the ability to see the future at will, she takes her job very seriously, and often wears the dress above.

2. When she's visiting Earth: Since nudity is (mostly) illegal there, she obviously has to dress well. She doesn't go there that often ever since her last boyfriend (a fugitive demon) was killed, though.

3. When she's traveling with Jeremy (my main OC - sorry if you thought it was Maria, btw): Although he doesn't mind her being naked at home or when he's not around, he prefers that all his apprentices at least wear some clothes. This is when she dresses her skimpiest (loves to test his patience).

Colors coming soon!

NOTE: You may critique everything except her right hand - I already know it was an epic fail, but since I'm also working on another top-secret pic (I'll show it when it's done), I am not going to fix it.

That is all.


Critique requested: thetruehentaiaddict would like constructive critique for this submission.
Dimensions: 3000 × 5000 px.
Submitted: Oct 25, 2008 12:15 AM
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Saturday, October 25, 2008 at 08:22 PM

It's nice.

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Saturday, October 25, 2008 at 12:22 AM

I feel that the right arm need to be extended a bit more.
That's my only concern.
otherwise I like the pose.

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Saturday, October 25, 2008 at 12:41 AM

Thanks! Smile

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